Squeeeee!!! clap Gosh, I just love this story. See, check out this line:

Originally Posted by ShayneT
“Words of faint praise often indicate subtle criticism,” he said, frowning.

One sentence captures the mood, the place in time, the character of this man...the sentence structure would work no where else but in this story. You're my hero! thumbsup

I enjoyed both this section and last for reflecting correctly that each character would be just as out of place in the other's time. But that a man of his time would be willing to drop everything for her? <<swoon>> So romantic!

Please don't let this relationship end badly!!! grovel Waiting impatiently for the next part!

You can find my stories as Groobie on the nfic archives and Susan Young on the gfic archives. In other words, you know me as Groobie. wink