Am loving your adaptation of the movie, Shayne. I don't know if it was me and my toddler-affected reading environment, but the scene shift with the bad guy showing up was a little abrupt for me. Did you mention the price on her head earlier in the story and I just missed it?
I really loved her flickering in and out of time like that. Besides it being a great visual, it goes a long way to explain her Clark sightings through the years. How he was able to find her in times of trouble is another mystery, though.
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