Oh, dear. Clark caused Lois and Lex to be exposed to Revenge AGAIN? Yikes! If Lex was mad at Clark from getting the move on him before, after his arrest he's going to be especially mad. Let's hope he doesn't get exposed to Kryptonite again any time soon.
Does Clark really think taking Lois to SMALLVILLE is the correct answer, when his wife is pheromoned out? Will she appreciate him showing her new in-laws how she's acts when she's like that? (My guess, 'no'.) I bet she'd have rather returned to the deserted island. (That was this story, yes? I've been reading stories from the archives during my afternoon walks on the tredmil, and I'm afraid their meshing together. So, I apologize, if I got mixed up.)
I liked Lex waking up with no memories of assaulting Lois, yet having a gouge in his cheek. You'd think he would have learned some more details from Nigel. Does he remember that Lois is married? Because it seemed from the DP scene where Lex looks for Lois, Lex doesn't remember she's married to Clark. I'm hoping his gun is unregistered.
Your explanation on Lois suddenly wanting to kiss Superman at the airport makes more sense. Of course, she would be exposed again from all the second hand exposure from Superman. It wasn't very clear in canon if both members needed to be sprayed for craziness to ensue. We kind of got mixed messages on the show. Perry was sprayed but Rehalia wasn't. Yet, if only one needed to be sprayed, why would Miranda spray herself again when she sprayed Lex unless he needed to smell the perfume on her as well? (Because if she was already obsessed with Lex, why would she need to the spray?)
So, it seems, unless Lois gets really mad at Clark due to where he took her this second time she's been exposed to Revenge, both of them will be checking into the honeymoon suite together. Or will he get called away on their honeymoon.
I guess I'll have to read and find out. Fun re-write, Ken.
