Wow! Plot's building up and so is the angsty tension.
My favorite lines:
And he kissed her, held her, poured his soul out to her, as if he had to take and share a lifetime’s worth of kisses in just these few minutes.
After all, maybe he had.
This line squarely drives home the point that time is of the esence.
~Ankit (so happy frequency of posting's increased
)