God, this was just an amazing chapter. Literal goosebumps rising on my arm, an ache in the pit of my stomach, even a mild sense of nausea over the unfolding events... all I can say is bravo. Very intense and superbly written. I can't wait for the next installment.


Chris
"Superman is a guy who's seen wonders we'll never see and Lois is to him, one of those wonders."