Hi Virginia!! finally I was able to find 5 minutes to comment about this story. I can't believe I haven't read before!
As usual you got me hooked from the first chapter. Really woman. you have a gift... and I'm so happy that you wanted to share your work with all of the fans
a few comments:
1. I don't like alt-Clark + alt-Mayson's relationship!! well, anyway I think is really for the best that they kiss, instead of Lois
2. I'm really happy that Sam Lane accept all about alternate dimensions! his help will be very handy, also Star's (Moonbeam). Is alt-Lucy going to appear in this story? I really hope not....
3. Junior... hummm... is he the disfigured guy? agh....
certainly I don't like that crazy one.... and the idea of a complot against alt-superman between he and Trask, gives me chills....
I want to write soo much more, but I have 2 little girls jumping around me! and 2 nieces too... they want to go to the park... so, I gotta go... I hope to come back at evening...
See you!