Originally Posted by LabRat
Well, I enjoyed it greatly. The writing style drew me in fairly easily and most importantly of all, for this reader, the dialogue flowed well, wasn't stilted or made me wince. It all sounded perfectly authentic. In fact, I'd say not only should you continue, but you should see if you can't get it published once it's done.

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jawdrop Thanks, Labby!! Your post made my day!! smile1 I'm off to post part two...

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