Feedback topic for (working title) Operation Argus!

If you've read through it, you know now that I'm going for an AU approach that builds in a little mystery. Biggest question for you help is how do you think I should continue beyond this first part? Stick with Lois in the "present" and unravel things as she finds them? Or go back to the beginning with Clark's perspective and lay it all out? I'm honestly undecided between the two. I like the idea of sticking with Lois, but then that means really staying in her point of view without getting into Clark's head at all, and I'm not sure I could resist that temptation. wink

Now I just have to get myself back into the rhythm of writing fiction. It's been too long!