YAY!!! It's done! I've been waiting very impatiently for this, and I'm happy to see that my high hopes were not dashed to pieces on the rocks.
I loved everything about it, so where do I even begin?! I really liked how you did the steps forward and steps back thing with the advancement of the relationship and then a set back. Also, you are totally right about switching the points of view. It works so much better that way...great choice! The clips you used for the "it ain't fiction" were perfect. Ooh, ooh, and I loved all the scooping up clips you used toward the end. And your transitions and effects were so well timed and perfectly used and not overused, and ok, I'm going to stop rambling now, and go watch it again.
