Oh, that was good. I Loved it. Ditto on what everyone else said. That was awesome. You edited that really good. Now i have to go read the story again. If only I can have the beginning music play while I read the story. Good job!
Rach
Me: what are you looking at *Snatches pic* OMFG! Dean smeared in peanut butter?! WTF?! Sara: LMAO it was chocolate!! smeared in chocolate! Me: LMFAO chocolate smeared in chocolate! Sara: LMAO the *chocolate* isn't smeared in chocolate! Me: that's the way i read it. was trying to picture chocolate smeared in chocolate Sara: ROTFLMAO