Wow, Snave!! Can I tell you how honored I am that Emma inspired you to write a whole story revolving around her antics? Honestly, this is so cool. I love how you've taken the idea and run with it.
This is a great start. Very intriguing. I'm already wondering how Lois is going to react once she puts things together, assuming she puts things together.
I'm heading off to read part two now...
Great job!
Lynn
