FDK: Cherub, Part 1/5 - Lois & Clark Fanfic Message Boards

This is my first post to these (or, in fact, any) boards; so any helpful suggestions would be welcome.

Thanks!
--Snave

I love the fact that this fandom is still attracting new writers! And we normally attract good writers! You're no exception.

This is a great start to what looks like a fun story. I have a pretty good idea who saved Walter from a watery grave, but I'm really looking forward to seeing where you go with this and how Lois and Clark are going to react.

Interesting premise. I'm definitely looking forward to more.

Irene

Hi,

I really enjoy unusual stories and this definitely seems to fall into this category.

It was also well written. Welcome to our community of writers, and I'll be waiting eagerly to see how this story unfolds.

Yours Jenni

Welcome to the boards, Snave!

I'm looking forward to seeing where this is headed. Please post more soon.

Tricia

Wow!!!!

Hi,

Great start.

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"I was actually lifted by the hand -- well, sort of -- out of what would have been a watery grave in the depths of Hobbs Bay, by this little being who descended straight from the sky..." *Sort of* lifted? By a *little* angel? Lois read on, now completely fascinated.

Emma can't flight?

More ASAP, please.

MAF

Ooh, a good start and an interesting premise! I'll be waiting for the next part.

Susan

As usual these days, I haven't time to catch up on this one - sorry, Snave.

But did just want to say thanks

LabRat

Wow, Snave!! Can I tell you how honored I am that Emma inspired you to write a whole story revolving around her antics? Honestly, this is so cool. I love how you've taken the idea and run with it.

This is a great start. Very intriguing. I'm already wondering how Lois is going to react once she puts things together, assuming she puts things together.

I'm heading off to read part two now...

Great job!

Lynn