Very nice! I liked the quick use of scenes for the "hey you" lyrics, that was really cool. I'm surprised you found so many good scenes to use when Dan is only in three episodes, but way to go.
Only thing I might have done a little differently was put in more shots of Lois looking like she's trying to make a decision, or any closeups of her really. Oh, you did use a bunch, just maybe a few more of her would have been great, a
few less of Dan (now why when I type that do I accidentally type "Dean" every time???) Oh, but it's still awesome the way it is.
Good song choice, and very fun and well done. Can't wait to see what you are making next.
