I am a little late to reply, but I felt I had to read the story before I did. The story is excellent, Lynn! It actually made me cry ! whinging And not many do. And the trailer is excellent, too. That segment where Lois is on the floor and crying, just gets me every time. Even though we have more than enough TOGOM rewrites (*cough* Wendy *cough*), I always find myself enjoying them. Keep writing and making more trailers!

Julie

Mulder: Imagine if you could come back and take out five people who had caused you to suffer. Who would they be?
Scully: I only get five?
Mulder: I remembered your birthday this year, didn't I, Scully?

(The X-Files)