I hate having to do this, but I'm tired and not coming up with proper comments. Not sure why, but the story clearly deserves them whether I'm coming up with them or not. So, even though this was a really cool story and quite likely kerth-worthy and there were a lot of little things that I really loved (not to mention the way it all strung together to make a beautiful flowing whole), I think I'm going to have to just bite the bullet for now and make a "me too" post. So, ditto Wendy and Pam and Laura and...

Great story. clap

Paul

P.S. Nice sig. Now you've got that line stuck in my head. The only thing is that he said "eatable," which isn't really a word but is proper for the childish moment. Don't ask me why I'm bothering to mention this, but it's kind of been nagging at me. Sorry.

When in doubt, think about penguins. It probably won't help, but at least it'll be fun.