ROTFLMAO. This was amuzing and had me laughing out loud. It was also sweet and romantic and I just loved it. Laura

Oh, wow! Really, really good, Sara!

The first person works so well here for Clark's confusion, disbelief, fear and, in the end, determination. And you have some marvellous lines - I had to laugh at this:




Wendy

Weee! Lois jumping off!

Ver nice ending...well done!

~Lois Lane Wanna Be

Great job, loved how this story took a turn at the end of part 1 and wrapped up so perfectly in part 2!

And LOIS! OMG, she is nuts jumping off the balcony like that!!! LOL, too cute!

~Liz

This was very funny and amusing, but cute and sweet at the same time! Bravo!

I enjoyed this story very much. Keep writing.
See ya,
AnnaBtG.

Hi,

Great story.

Loved Clark trying to convice Lois that he *wasn't* Superman. Not to mention, trying to convince himself. Very funny, but then very emotional, too, after Lois flings herself off (yet another) building.

Great work, Sorcha

PJ

What a great present!

I loved the way you were able to mix comedy with drama.

And Lois throwing herself of the balcony - ouch! I would've had my hands over my eyes for that bit, except I wouldn't have been able to read what happened next.

Thank you!

Helga

I hate having to do this, but I'm tired and not coming up with proper comments. Not sure why, but the story clearly deserves them whether I'm coming up with them or not. So, even though this was a really cool story and quite likely kerth-worthy and there were a lot of little things that I really loved (not to mention the way it all strung together to make a beautiful flowing whole), I think I'm going to have to just bite the bullet for now and make a "me too" post. So, ditto Wendy and Pam and Laura and...

Great story.

Paul

P.S. Nice sig. Now you've got that line stuck in my head. The only thing is that he said "eatable," which isn't really a word but is proper for the childish moment. Don't ask me why I'm bothering to mention this, but it's kind of been nagging at me. Sorry.

I loved it!

Actually, if you think about it, Lois wasn't really being all that impulsive, or 'crazy' by jumping off the balcony.

It was a calculated risk. If Clark hadn't regained his memory and been able to save her, she would have just died a few hours earlier than everyone else when Nightfall hit.

Tank (who likes to point out that Lois is actually always taking the logical route)

Sara

WOW! This is excellent. I love it.

Tricia

Oops...

I'm horribly late to this I'm sorry, guys - I've been absolutely and literally swamped this past week, and I didn't mean to let it drag on this long!

And now that that's over with...

This story was basically a little piece of fluff written in an attempt to convince everybody - and especially Sara <g> - that I can still write stories that try desperately to be funny, with lots of WAFFs and the barest scraping of angst I'm honoured by the reception it's gotten

Thank you all so much. You've truly made my year! One <g>]