Wendy, Wendy, Wendy, I can't believe you wrote this. I would never have expected it from you.
Tsk, Tsk, pandering to the gentle readers like this is just... shameful.
How could you write an entire instalment (and a short one at that) where nothing happens except another boring kiss. I mean how many ways can one write a stupid kiss. Their lips meet and they kiss, big deal.
Okay, so you can claim that it was there for B plot development. Bah! They are no farther along than they were last time. I'm afrain I'm going to have to put my foot down here and demand you place all this B plot nonsense on that back burner for a while and get to the important parts of the story. THE WHAMS! (and the haircut?)
Tank (who tells Wendy she'd better watch out because of her posting these longer stories he may just catch up with his vignette binge... a perusal of the old hard drive turned up 12 stories that haven't been submitted to the archive yet
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