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“I gave it all up for you, because of you,” her voice wavered, “and you’re not even real.”
Heartbroken. I'm just heartbroken.

The pain is very tangible here. She loves him, but is deeply hurt by his secretiveness.

Really lovely writing, David. I like the sparse style.

Can't wait to see how they (you) sort this out.


Chris
"Superman is a guy who's seen wonders we'll never see and Lois is to him, one of those wonders."