Really liked this section...
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“You did, Ms Lane, along with the millions of other voters who elected people whose job is to make those decisions, and to hire others to implement them. The law is representative of the will of the people.”
HA!! Take that, you media jackel...er...Lois Lane...cause she...you guys know HOW SHE IS!!

Yeah, so anyway, wow! so Rachel's the issue hmmm

I liked this ...
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She’d gotten over him, made peace with the situation. That’s what she’d been telling her family for years. Having him return to Smallville shouldn’t make a difference. The public humiliation she’d endured was a thing of the past; people had forgotten, or so she’d been telling herself.
...kind of really sets up how the small town situation is and gotta feel bad that she had to "get over him" and wondering how close they had become that she is so angry with him. (checks, sending checks mad?)

Super hyper

TEEEEEEEJ