Comments: Single White Kryptonian 8 - Lois & Clark Fanfic Message Boards

Well, we are down to the last of the chapters on Zoom's boards. After this, only three more reposts before we hit the new stuff. In answer to Hazel's question: this is AltClark in a world where Tempus never interfered, yet Lana was never part of Clark's life either.

Thanks for all the feedback, and let me know what you think!

Talk about grim implications here! I can't make up my mind if it's something that Clark did, something people thought he did, or something that happened because of who he is.

I guess we'll need the next section real soon so we can find out, huh?

I like your portrayal of Rachel, although I'm saddened to see that she feels that Clark caused a major stumbling block in her life. Good for her for sticking it out. Although, come to think of it... if Lana wasn't part of his life, as you explained, does that mean that Rachel knows the Secret (tm) and it's that, with all its repercussions, that caused the blight on Clark's past in Smallville?

This is happening too soon for Clark to really trust Lois; unlike in GGGOH, they're not friends quite yet. So it will be verrry interesting to see what happens next.

Looking forward to more, and soon!

Hazel

This Rachel is really interesting. What has Clark done?

I want to read more...

gerry

Wow what is up with Rachel? Poor Clark, he just never gets a break does he. Laura

It's been ten years since Clark left Smallville.

It's been ten years since the last violent crime.

Hmmm....

James

Hi,

Great piece.

Really liked this section...

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“You did, Ms Lane, along with the millions of other voters who elected people whose job is to make those decisions, and to hire others to implement them. The law is representative of the will of the people.”

HA!! Take that, you media jackel...er...Lois Lane...cause she...you guys know HOW SHE IS!!

Yeah, so anyway, wow! so Rachel's the issue hmmm

I liked this ...

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She’d gotten over him, made peace with the situation. That’s what she’d been telling her family for years. Having him return to Smallville shouldn’t make a difference. The public humiliation she’d endured was a thing of the past; people had forgotten, or so she’d been telling herself.

...kind of really sets up how the small town situation is and gotta feel bad that she had to "get over him" and wondering how close they had become that she is so angry with him. (checks, sending checks mad?)

Super

TEEEEEEEJ

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The bastard really should have stayed away.

Ooh! Intriguing.

Post more soon, please.

Yvonne

I'm needing answers!

Ohmigosh, I'm dying of curiosity!!

JD

Whoa, very nice part and verrrrrry interesting clues you're dropping!

More soon!

~Liz

Shayne

An excellent part!

Tricia