Oops, I never commented on the first section, did I. blush Terrible!

Well, I'll just have to come up with twice as many comments on part 2. wink

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She shrugged her shoulders and turned away. "This is too much. I can't believe..." <How much pressure you're putting on me!> she thought, hoping she hadn't spoken out loud.
Nah, Lois, say it out loud! help Well done, though -- I was just as confused as Lois about what was actually going on. Didn't pick up on the clues like this one:
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his hair, but felt very different from what she had imagined in her fantasies. Longer, not as thick as she would have thought...
until I read the section thru a second time. razz

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Clark collapsed on the floor as a new wave of agony swept through him.
wildguy Get back here, Missy! And fix this!

Do you know the most surprising thing about divorce? It doesn't actually kill you, like a bullet to the heart or a head-on car wreck. It should. When someone you've promised to cherish till death do you part says, "I never loved you," it should kill you instantly.

- Under the Tuscan Sun