I have to say that I'm EXTREMELY impressed by this story, both in the tight plotting and in the characterizations of all the people involved. It's both funny and tense, both random and controlled. Sheesh, why don't my stories turn out like this?
And my favorite parts? Hey, it's ALL good! Clark yelling for Superman? Lois threatening to ground her descendant? "Holy freakin' cow!" Very, very inventive.
I am with everyone else. I'm going to have trouble waiting for the final installment. Any chance of an early posting? Hello? Is anyone listening? Like, can you post it as soon as I finish this? What do you mean, 'schedule?'
