Oh, nice place to end it, Wendy. Right *before* he goes over to find out she's still breating/been replaced by a clone/been replaced by a dummy so she could make her escape! Hmph. Now poor Clark is stuck there, thinking she's dead... So sad... Poor Clark...
So I really think you should post the next part now. I mean, you wouldn't want to leave Clark in such a sad and depressed place, right? Surely you want to reassure me--er, I mean, him, by posting the next part and letting him discover she's not really dead?
Or... /me is suddenly suspicious Is this going to be a ghost-Lois story?
Great start! Can't wait to see more!
Bethy
