It's not quite what you're looking for, but Plane Storm is the first story in a great L&C / Superman Returns crossover series over on fanfiction.net. It's been a while since I've read it, but as I remember our Lois and Clark were rather critical of SR's Superman and the way he had dealt with Lois.

The story summary: When Superman and Lois are thrown into a world where Clark Kent is EnC of the Daily Planet and married for ten years to Lois Lane, things get more than a little strange for both sets of Lois and Clark.

"It is a remarkable dichotomy. In many ways, Clark is the most human of us all. Then...he shoots fire from the skies, and it is difficult not to think of him as a god. And how fortunate we all are that it does not occur to him." -Batman (in Superman/Batman #3 by Jeph Loeb)