I always tell anyone who watches the movie with me that if Gilbert had just wrapped his coat around Anne and kissed her senseless, she would have realized her true feelings for him.
I think you're right!
If Clark had just kissed her, we'd have seen what you've written here, instead of the way the episode had it.
For a few minutes there, when they both got rained on, and they started talking about Superman, I thought Lois had tumbled to Clark's secret-- what with the wet hair and all... But I forgot, he'd still have had his glasses on.
I'm glad you had Lois go after him, instead of letting him leave.
Nice job!! Feel like writing any more stories?
~Toc
