Excellent start, Noelle! Very well written, with such in-character Lois-babble, especially when she's trying desperately not to let Clark or his parents suspect that anything's up.
I can really hear the characters' voices in what I've read so far.
I like Perry's caution - nicely done.
But poor Clark! Lois is on his tail, and she's already forgetting Clark, the human side, in her quest for the caped Superhero.
So... how long is this going to be, and when are you posting again?
Wendy
