I liked yours better, Pam, anyway. I wasn't sure how to include direct links to Yvonne's story, so glad you were able to include that.
Also the link to Y's other work was a nice touch.
LabRat
Athos: If you'd told us what you were doing, we might have been able to plan this properly. Aramis: Yes, sorry. Athos: No, no, by all means, let's keep things suicidal.