Speaking of dialogue mixed with narrative, and commas - I'm having some trouble with the last sentence (sentences?) in this paragraph:

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But he’d taken the trouble of shaving before he’d come back to her. “Mmmmm…” she murmured. “So the smooth look is for me?” Running a fingertip along his jaw, she added, “Well, I liked your slightly scruffy look…” She dropped her voice to a throaty purr. “…Superman…” and smiled as he moaned softly. “…but this is even nicer…”
What do I need to fix? I'm not sure I've got it quite right.

smile 'Toc

TicAndToc :o)

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