I've been out of town for the past few days (up north trying to prevent all those horrible criminals from facing the consequences of their actions blush ). How nice to come back to see this thread. Thanks everyone for your very kind comments. I'm glad you enjoyed the story.

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I would be surprised if there was an nfic version; there's no need for one.
As to your question about a nfic version, Kathy, the answer, as you guessed, is that there is not a nfic version. It's hard to have a nfic version when you've written a story without any nookie in it laugh . On the other hand, I have been playing with a nfic epilogue idea - to find out what happend during a certain weekend of pure relaxation cool

Again, I'm glad you all enjoyed the story. What a nice way to come back to town.

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She was in such a good mood she let all the pedestrians in the crosswalk get to safety before taking off again.
- CC Aiken, The Late Great Lois Lane