One major theatrical flaw is that it doesn't have a lot of movement in it. The audience really has to pay attention to the lines because the characters basically sit through the whole thing
I don't agree, Mirage, that's not a flaw. There are numerous theatrical productions that rely solely on dialogue between two actors. It all depends on how powerful the performances are; you're right about that. That's why I can't picture this play being done as a schoolplay. So, if your drama teacher refuses it, don't get discouraged!
And how's the second baby story coming along?
Slowly!
I wrote TAS in nine months; it looks like the sequel will take longer - right now the Muse is enjoying a Christmas vacation!
Ursie
