Nan, there were a few typos and the abrupt back up in the timeline was a bit hard to catch onto at first.. but wow, I was so sucked in it was not funny! I would really like to sit down and read this from start to finish and be able to make notations thru-out, there are so many places that I think are genious, but then there are some places that need some expansion or tightening up... I guess the verdict is... great section and I can't wait for tomorrow.
