I warned you this thing has more twists and turns than a roller coaster. About the time you solve one problem, a couple more pop up. We're now about halfway through.

Comments?

Nan, there were a few typos and the abrupt back up in the timeline was a bit hard to catch onto at first.. but wow, I was so sucked in it was not funny! I would really like to sit down and read this from start to finish and be able to make notations thru-out, there are so many places that I think are genious, but then there are some places that need some expansion or tightening up... I guess the verdict is... great section and I can't wait for tomorrow.

If I'd been Lori, I would have shot him dead.

James, who is thrilled at the pace of this thing and am loving the POV changes to get more detail.

Boy, Lord C is getting to be a real jerk.