Randi,

You keep adding content to your story here on the board.

I would encourage you to do the work privately and build your story. When you think it is ready, then post it.

Some authors post their stories as the develop them. Personally, I will not start to post a story until the entire text is 'in the can', beta'd and ready to go.

By working with a beta reader you can avoid errors like 'box canyons', plot devices that just won't work, that you have to back track your way out of.

You have the outline already and you've been building it.

Play with it.


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