Hey guys,
Thanks for the comments.
I really don't like self-insertion -- sorry! Also, there are some factual errors.
I'm sorry you feel this way, Laura, but I told you to read before I posted. It is not my fault that you didn't take the time to do so though I must admit I had the best intentions with it, and I am very disappointed that you didn't like it. I respect your opinion and promise it won't be done again.
The Waffy story had a good ending and i did exatly what i was told : a waffy story about Lois and Clark. It was 'literally' a story inside the story also following my personal style - to create twisted endings.
Again I am sorry it is not appreciated by everybody, but I won't change it anyway.
Only when and if I want too.
Thanks for all the comments - the good and the bad ones. I really like when people take the time to say that my story is great or that it sucks. Makes me feel really happy when you guys do it.
Other comments are always welcome.
MDL.
