This was just adorable, Yvonne. Sharp, pithy dialogue, great characterisation, poignant and funny and waffy, and had me snuffling into my keyboard by the end, especially those last couple of paragraphs.

It really touched me, this one. smile

Superb.

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Athos: If you'd told us what you were doing, we might have been able to plan this properly.
Aramis: Yes, sorry.
Athos: No, no, by all means, let's keep things suicidal.

The Musketeers