LOL!! Oh, too funny!
I loved Allison. She might not be like you, but she was adorable!
And a ton of cute lines in here ... from everyone being given nicknames, to the way Allison was encouraging "Lo" to go after "Chuck", to Lois's hair being in pigtails, LOL.
This was my favorite line, though:
Allison felt satisfied that she’d let poor inexperienced Lo into the Inner Circle of Cashier’s Trust.
That was just inspired. <G>
“How come we only get to kiss like that when we’re undercover?” he asked bashfully.
Lois flushed. “I don’t know, Clark... but I almost forgot something. I am *totally* supposed to ask you out. ‘Cause we’d *seriously* be the cutest couple. Wink-wink, nudge-nudge.”
And LOL again ... perfect ending! So funny.
Great challenge response, Wanda! Er, I mean ... Al.
Kathy
