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Posted By: Wanda Detroit FDK: Ace is the Place - 10/20/03 12:28 PM
I thought I'd get the ball rolling with my own Undercover Workplace Challenge response. I hope you enjoy it!
Feedback is welcome!
-Wanda "I love hardware" Detroit wave
Posted By: Wendymr Re: FDK: Ace is the Place - 10/20/03 01:00 PM
This is great, Wanda! Very well written, cute, and very funny! goofy

Hope to see more from you soon!


Wendy smile
Posted By: daneel Re: FDK: Ace is the Place - 10/20/03 01:30 PM
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Posted By: merry Re: FDK: Ace is the Place - 10/20/03 01:40 PM
Wanda,
well done and funny
merry
Posted By: rivka Re: FDK: Ace is the Place - 10/20/03 01:45 PM
Totally clever! Seriously!

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Posted By: shells Re: FDK: Ace is the Place - 10/20/03 02:15 PM
Very cute Wanda!

keep writing!
Posted By: Anna B. the Greek Re: FDK: Ace is the Place - 10/20/03 02:22 PM
Cute, as they said! So lovely! sloppy

Keep writing! wink
AnnaBtG.
Posted By: Laurach Re: FDK: Ace is the Place - 10/20/03 05:05 PM
Totally awesome dudette<g> Very cute Wanda. Laura
Posted By: Queen of the Capes Re: FDK: Ace is the Place - 10/20/03 07:33 PM
laugh
Loved it!
Posted By: TriciaW Re: FDK: Ace is the Place - 10/21/03 05:01 AM
Wanda

This is great. thumbsup

Thanks for sharing this fun story. clap
I thoroughly enjoyed it. jump

Tricia cool
Posted By: KathyB Re: FDK: Ace is the Place - 10/21/03 10:33 AM
LOL!! Oh, too funny!

I loved Allison. She might not be like you, but she was adorable!

And a ton of cute lines in here ... from everyone being given nicknames, to the way Allison was encouraging "Lo" to go after "Chuck", to Lois's hair being in pigtails, LOL.

This was my favorite line, though:

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Allison felt satisfied that she’d let poor inexperienced Lo into the Inner Circle of Cashier’s Trust.
That was just inspired. <G>

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“How come we only get to kiss like that when we’re undercover?” he asked bashfully.

Lois flushed. “I don’t know, Clark... but I almost forgot something. I am *totally* supposed to ask you out. ‘Cause we’d *seriously* be the cutest couple. Wink-wink, nudge-nudge.”
And LOL again ... perfect ending! So funny. smile

Great challenge response, Wanda! Er, I mean ... Al. wink

Kathy
Posted By: Wanda Detroit Re: FDK: Ace is the Place - 10/21/03 04:42 PM
Thanks for the awesome feedback! I appreciate it and am glad I made you laugh!!

Thought I'd shed some light on the "true lies" behind "Ace is the Place!"

The Allison (Al) character is really a conglomeration of all of the girls I work with. I think she's an accurate presentation of how we all are together. We are definitely gossips, and we know the dirt on customers. We like to dish. We are trusting and very friendly with the "newbies." (Hence Lo being let into the Inner Circle of Cashier's Trust on the second day!)

The customers I mentioned are all based on real customers. I changed the name for all of them, except there really is someone we call the "Mad Bomber," which is what gave me the idea!

Well, thanks again for leaving feedback... You guys are so totally awesome. *Seriously.*

Hugs from...
Wanda "Home Depot is *so* not cool" Detroit

PS: Yes, on slow days, someone can usually be seen giving someone else a new hairdo, or perhaps a makeover.
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PSS: I'm VERY excited to see everyone else's UNDERCOVER WORKPLACE CHALENGE responses... bring 'em on!!!
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