Paul,
Good job. I like how she trusted Clark with scissors near her hair. I'm very protective of mine, so I don't even like letting the hair stylist near mine with scissors.
I loved how she took a single story and equated hair with strength. But if she *really* didn't want people to pull it, she just needs to learn how to weild a pencil -- you can make a bun in about 20 seconds if you know what you're doing.
Bethy
