Nan, this is really working well. I like Bill Henderson with superpowers. It's fun watching him learn to deal with the powers and new situations. It's like seeing Superman through new eyes.
The conversation between Superman, UW and Henderson works really well. They've all easily accepted the situation. And they make quite a powerful team. Too bad that Metropolis will probably lose two of these superheroes.
Unlike Tank, I like the way you use Jimmy and the way you get the characters to appreciate the work he does. He deserves lots of credit for the work he does. So there, Tank.
I hope you find lots of time to write more...
gerry
