Nan,

Sorry I never got around to posting feedback for Part I, but I am reading this and enjoying it tremendously! (I love your writing.)

I with agree many others here, in that it took me for surprise when Henderson gave away the license plate number.

Unlike the others, I was not surprised to see Lois focusing on herself here as her first reaction to being converted into Ultrawoman again. Once she calms down, it will probably occur to her to wonder about Henderson.

I love your portrayal of Henderson, by the way, and watching his slow realization of what was happening was just priceless. Well done! notworthy

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Wow! A Supercop, Ultrawoman and Superman. Too many heros for a city.
LOL, Maria!

- Vicki

PS - FYI, I'm still reading and enjoying your original fiction works, too!

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