definitely an interesting start, nan. i like the style, and i like the fact that we're apparantly following henderson.
i'm a bit confused about this planter thing, though. you said it was concrete, right? concrete is not exactly known for its high conductivity. so, will the powers really be transferred? and just where did that lightning come from? was there some person or force somehow guiding it, or did it just happen to strike a concrete planter despite the nearby presence of a much taller building (quite possibly with a lightning rod)?
well, whatever the case with those little details, i'm definitely interested to see what happens next.
Paul
