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So Lois is mourning/ not mourning Clark. Still we don't really know what she thinks happened to him. Did he get lost in an avalanche while he was supposedly skiing with Mayson? And where is she? Did she die in that car bombing?


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Originally Posted by bakasi
So Lois is mourning/ not mourning Clark. Still we don't really know what she thinks happened to him. Did he get lost in an avalanche while he was supposedly skiing with Mayson? And where is she? Did she die in that car bombing?

Thanks for pointing the inconsistency about Clark's backstory out! I have gone back and edited some of the early chapters to clarify what people were led to believe. As far as Mayson goes, I don't really have a storyline need for her to be involved. That may change as we get further into the story. We'll see...


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But now here he was. Not just asking for her trust—but earning it again.

“Don’t make me regret it,” she said quietly.

“I won’t.”

She nodded to herself and ended the call.

A great deal has happen between them and as yet, what it is has not been revealed.

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He wanted to demonstrate that he was competent and capable, that he wouldn’t need hand holding because of his condition. He hit send before he lost his confidence then, shutting down the computer, he started his nightly routine of preparing for bed. The motions were simple—familiar. Toothbrush. Lights. Checking the locks by touch. Each one reminded him that control didn’t require sight—only belief. Belief he still belonged.

Kallen's isolation is so sad. I want to give him a hug...

Wanted to say, I'm really enjoying this story!

Last edited by Morgana; 05/07/25 01:19 PM.

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