MDL, This was great!

Woohoo! How delightful to see you back with your NLTVs, Erica! We've missed those.

Remember to send it along to the Archive, you hear?

LabRat

wow Erica, I love it.

I am glad you posted this fic.

Karla

This was so cute, Erica! I had five golden grins on my face the whole time!

Nicole~

Lol very cute. Laura

It was a nice story. As Nicole said, Perry's lyrics to Twelve Days of Christmas was a good laugh

I liked how you put everything in and, while there were some mistakes here and there, the story flowed well. Good job!

Hope to see more of your writing soon.
Anna

Thanks for the replies girls. I've forgotten how good it is to write and how good it is to wait for feedback later.

Revising the story, I could see loads of mistakes, but as I said I had only 30 minutes to make it during my break time from work. But I'll try to correct them before sending to a BR. By the time it reaches Labby's hand, I hope it will be okay

The lyrics of the song were a bit longer... Where Perry actually sung until the fifth item that would be five golden grins

"On the first of Christmas my true boss sent to me.. an alluminium tree.
On the second day of Christmas my true boss sent to me, two purple gloves and ... an alluminium tree.
On third day of Christmas my true boss sent to me three strange pans, two purple gloves and... an alluminium tree.

On the fourth day of Christmas my true boss sent to me four awful notes, three strange pans, two purple gloves and... an alluminium tree.

On the fifth day of Christmas my true boss sent to me... five golden grins... four awful notes, three strange pans, two purple gloves and an alluminium tree."

But that would be too much

thanks for the support, notes, and grins. I hope you all have a great Xmas and a wonderful New Year!


MDL - counting down the days for her own birthday