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Posted By: BanAnna FDK: The Glasses - 08/04/05 10:43 PM
Aww! I loved it!! I always thought it probably happened a little something like that too.

I especially loved those last couple of paragraphs to tie it in to what we saw on the show. It really looked liek that's exactly what he was thinking! clap

Thanks for the great read!!

~Anna
Posted By: Wendymr Re: FDK: The Glasses - 08/05/05 12:16 AM
Really nice, Sarah! Like Anna, I especially liked the final section, where you showed him taking off the glasses again as Superman - bringing it full circle.

You should write these short ones more often! thumbsup


Wendy smile
Posted By: Mister Data Re: FDK: The Glasses - 08/05/05 09:38 AM
cute

James
Posted By: TriciaW Re: FDK: The Glasses - 08/06/05 04:53 AM
Sarah

A lovely story! smile1 I thoroughly enjoyed it.

Tricia cool
Posted By: Anna B. the Greek Re: FDK: The Glasses - 08/06/05 04:58 PM
Love it! It's great! Excellent idea thumbsup

Keep writing!
AnnaBtG. smile
Posted By: SuperRoo Re: FDK: The Glasses - 08/06/05 07:01 PM
Excellent!!!!! party
Posted By: Laurach Re: FDK: The Glasses - 08/07/05 05:10 PM
Well I liked the story but I especially liked the end when he stands a little taller and becomes free to be himself the Superhero. Laura
Posted By: Carolyn Re: FDK: The Glasses - 08/08/05 08:28 PM
Nice story, as everyone else I loved the end: the simbolism around the glasses makes it very special.

Carolyn smile
Posted By: Meerkat Re: FDK: The Glasses - 08/09/05 07:11 PM
Thanks for your comments! I'm glad everybody liked the last little section. That was the part I wasn't sure about, because it's very different in tone from the rest of the story. But I liked it, so I left it in, and now I'm glad I did! Thanks again!
Posted By: snipsa Re: FDK: The Glasses - 08/10/05 04:13 AM
It was really nice!

I also especially loved the last part. (Btw. Meerkat, why that name, I thought Meerkat was only an Afrikaans word, sorry, I'm interested smile )

Once again really well done, I loved it.

(Newbie alert!)
Posted By: Bumpkin Re: FDK: The Glasses - 08/17/05 05:03 PM
Awwwwwww smile

keep penning,
Marns
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