FDK: One Strange Year 7/? - Lois & Clark Fanfic Message Boards

Have fun, though.

Julie

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And She’d almost ruined it by crying Clark’s name!

Jen

I loved how Lois jumped back and forth from pos. to neg.

Oh my gosh! She almost cried out Clark's name....! I can't believe he didn't tell her!!! Oh, but this will turn out an awesome argument!!!!

I can hardly wait.

Thank you for telling us the results....I'd hate to have a mini cliff hanger.

What they said! I was expecting you to stop right before the result, THANK YOU for not doing that!

And this is SO GOOD!

Clark thinks she wants Supes, she wants Clark but is afraid to hurt Superman's feelings . . .

Have a fun trip, but come back soon and post the next part!

Oooh, this is good! This is *really* good! Right from Part I, you had me hooked, and each part just keeps getting better.

What everyone has already said. I loved the 'please be positive/negative' back-and-forth going on as Lois considered what she was getting herself in for.

I wanted to tell you that I think you are doing a very good job in setting this up, and taking it forward. One of the reasons I don't write fanfic is that I often come up with an idea in my head, but as I play it out I find I usually paint myself in a corner and have nowhere to go. Does that make any sense? Anyway, when you started this story, I was wondering where you would take it, and I am just amazed at what you are doing!

Have a nice trip. Come back soon. Post Part 8!

- Vicki

Mary

Yikes, positive!!

Tricia

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I wanted to tell you that I think you are doing a very good job in setting this up, and taking it forward.

That is right on exactly, wow! you wrote that out perfectly, you described the intimacy and passion of the night they spent together without even writing that scene. That was awesomely amazing.

I'm with everybody on the positive/negative scene, and Superman being right there, WOW!

And she's still wishing she was with Clark...gonna say it again...can't hold back...WOW!!!!!

Awesome story QOC, you rock!

TEEEEEEJ

Still awesome, Mary!

)... Just wanted to share.

I can't wait to see where you're heading, Mary! Please post the next part soon!!!

Have a nice time,
AnnaBtG.

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He wondered idly if that had contributed to the awkwardness afterwards. Once it was done, they were so---uncertain---around each other that he’d felt incredibly relieved when he heard the screams and gunfire coming from Wilson Park. Come to think of it, that place seemed to be a magnet for calamitous, high death-toll disasters…

Is it just me, or was the name of the park chosen purposefully?

Should we hide when she finds out?

Jose

Wow, this part was excellent.

PLEASE post again soon

~Julia

Hi,

Great part.

I just read all 7 part and I love the story.

Omigosh! She really does want Clark

Queenie, where are you?!
We want to know what's happening now!!!
How are Lois going to cope with the difficulty to tell to Clark about her pregnancy?

Simona

Thanks everyone for your comments! I'm glad you're enjoying the story.

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Originally posted by Anna B. the Greek:

I can't wait to see where you're heading, Mary! Please post the next part soon!!!

Have a nice time,
AnnaBtG.

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He wondered idly if that had contributed to the awkwardness afterwards. Once it was done, they were so---uncertain---around each other that he’d felt incredibly relieved when he heard the screams and gunfire coming from [b]Wilson Park. Come to think of it, that place seemed to be a magnet for calamitous, high death-toll disasters…

Is it just me, or was the name of the park chosen purposefully?

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1.It'll get posted soon enough
2.Thankyou

3.Yes

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When the heck is the next part coming out? And how the heck am I supposed to be able to stand all this suspense?

Well, I'm in Philly right now. (Well, technically I'm in Jersey, 'cuz that's where the hotel is). I get back home on Thursday, so how does next March sound to you?

In the meantime, you can alleviate some of the suspense by nagging Julie to post part 3 of Dude, Where's My Cape!