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Posted By: Shadow FDK: Strange...I can't remember the title...pt3 =) - 06/02/04 10:32 PM
Yay, keep going! This is a great story!

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There was a long pause.

“Mom? Are you still there?”

“Clark, hold on a second. JOHNATHAN!!!”
goofy

JD
Posted By: rivka Re: FDK: Strange...I can't remember the title...pt3 =) - 06/03/04 12:20 AM
The good:

yay! part three! goofy



The bad:

Too short! Need more!
Posted By: Wendymr Re: FDK: Strange...I can't remember the title...pt3 =) - 06/03/04 01:18 AM
Yup, too short, Mary! But otherwise this continues to be very entertaining and very well-written. Love your Martha!

Now - what is Clark going to do? I think he'd do some research on endometriosis, don't you? To find out just what it is, what it means and why Lois has been advised to get pregnant? I think he'd want to feel that he knew everything there was to know about her condition before he made any decision.

Waiting on part 4! wildguy wildguy


Wendy smile
Posted By: TriciaW Re: FDK: Strange...I can't remember the title...pt3 =) - 06/03/04 03:18 AM
Mary

A great part! smile1

Tricia cool
Posted By: daneel Re: FDK: Strange...I can't remember the title...pt3 =) - 06/03/04 06:16 AM
Nice talk! smile

short part!!! grumble

more hyper
Posted By: Anonymous Re: FDK: Strange...I can't remember the title...pt3 =) - 06/03/04 07:34 AM
Sounds like Clark has got a dilema. I love this story so far! and yeah your posts are short!

TEEEEJ
Posted By: Wanda Detroit Re: FDK: Strange...I can't remember the title...pt3 =) - 06/03/04 05:17 PM
Great work, Mary! I can't wait for the next part! thumbsup
--Wanda
Posted By: ethnica Re: FDK: Strange...I can't remember the title...pt3 =) - 06/03/04 05:25 PM
I can't wait until the part where Martha boxes Lois' ears! I don't usually advocate corporal punishment but S1 Lois makes my left foot itch...grrr! help
Posted By: It'sMeCaryn Re: FDK: Strange...I can't remember the title...pt3 =) - 06/03/04 07:58 PM
Mary, this is such a great answer to the story challenge.

Just what is Clark going to do? hyper
Caryn
Posted By: Anna B. the Greek Re: FDK: Strange...I can't remember the title...pt3 =) - 06/04/04 02:37 PM
This is excellent, Mary!! thumbsup thumbsup

Write more soon!!
AnnaBtG. hyper
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