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Posted By: Karen Fdk: Grownup Christmas List - 12/20/03 04:42 AM
Thanks, Jana! And I don't mind it a day early. Who can turn down early presents?! wink

I love this story. I like how Lois remembers her past Christmases (and what sad Christmases they were! frown ) and the list that she turns in. And then Clark makes some of it come true just by being there. Aww. Great! clap
Posted By: Wendymr Re: Fdk: Grownup Christmas List - 12/20/03 08:39 AM
I love this, Jana - very nicely done. A sweetly poignant letter from Lois, and the perfect response from Clark. thumbsup


Wendy smile
Posted By: daneel Re: Fdk: Grownup Christmas List - 12/20/03 08:51 AM
Beautiful letter, Jana smile

Jose smile1
Posted By: Tank Re: Fdk: Grownup Christmas List - 12/20/03 09:29 AM
Nicely done. Sweet and waffy.

I need to go and take more meds.

Tank (who is finding it harder to keep to his chosen 'Scrooge' persona in the face of this unrelenting onslaught of sweet waffy fics that have been prevailing lately)
Posted By: Laurach Re: Fdk: Grownup Christmas List - 12/20/03 12:21 PM
Aw
Posted By: Sorcha Re: Fdk: Grownup Christmas List - 12/20/03 01:08 PM
Jana, this was great! thumbsup Sweet, waffy, and nicely done. Fantastic job, and the perfect pick-me-up thumbsup

Sara [who fears she'll have to start liking Christmas, after all...]
Posted By: Loriel Eris Re: Fdk: Grownup Christmas List - 12/20/03 02:44 PM
Oh Jana, this was lovely. I think you captured Lois perfectly. smile

Loriel
Posted By: Anna B. the Greek Re: Fdk: Grownup Christmas List - 12/20/03 03:37 PM
This was lovely, Jana! Very sweet and WAFFy. I enjoyed reading it.

Happy Birthday, Karen.

AnnaBtG.
Posted By: TriciaW Re: Fdk: Grownup Christmas List - 12/20/03 10:00 PM
Jana

A great story! smile1
I thoroughly enjoyed it.

Happy birthday, Karen! party

Tricia cool
Posted By: KathyB Re: Fdk: Grownup Christmas List - 12/22/03 07:42 AM
Jana, this was wonderful ... I really loved it. I like the idea of Perry asking his writers for such a list and I really like what you have Lois ultimately write. Very poignant and insightful. Really nicely done.

And Clark's response was, of course, perfect.

Awesome job.

Kathy
Posted By: Supermom Re: Fdk: Grownup Christmas List - 12/22/03 09:29 AM
I like your taste in music. wink

A Grown Up Christmas List

You captured Lois well. smile
Posted By: merry Re: Fdk: Grownup Christmas List - 12/26/03 10:57 AM
Jana
nicely done
sweet and waffy
merry

sorry I'm late in posting

Happy late Birthday Karen

Happy Holidays - late too
Posted By: Jana Re: Fdk: Grownup Christmas List - 12/29/03 03:24 PM
Thank you all for the feedback. I'm glad to know this story was well received. It was my first attempt at a holiday fic, so I was a bit nervous. I just wanted to respond to a few specific comments... smile

Karen, I'm glad you enjoyed this. Hope your birthday was great!

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A sweetly poignant letter from Lois
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Beautiful letter, Jana
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I like the idea of Perry asking his writers for such a list and I really like what you have Lois ultimately write. Very poignant and insightful.
Thank you, Wendy, Jose and Kathy. As either of my BR's on this could tell you, I was very nervous about writing anything supposedly written by Lois. I really debated with myself on whether or not to even attempt the letter part of this fic. I'm so happy to know you liked it!

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Nicely done. Sweet and waffy.

I need to go and take more meds.
Oh, yeah. Sorry about that, Tank. Hope you didn't suffer too much from the sugary parts. wink

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Jana, this was great! Sweet, waffy, and nicely done. Fantastic job, and the perfect pick-me-up

Sara [who fears she'll have to start liking Christmas, after all...]
Thank you, Sara. smile As for liking Christmas, I think that is a perfectly nice idea, don't you? goofy

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I like your taste in music.

A Grown Up Christmas List

You captured Lois well.
<g> Thank you, Marilyn. I like your taste in music as well. wink It's a great song, isn't it?

Thank you Karen, Wendy, Jose, Tank, Laura, Sara, Loriel, Anna, Tricia, Kathy, Marilyn, and Merry. I appreciate each of you reading this little fic and taking the time to comment on it. smile Hope y'all had nice holidays. Thanks again!

Jana (who is preparing to disappear into oblivion again when classes start next Monday)
Posted By: Pelican Re: Fdk: Grownup Christmas List - 12/30/03 10:43 PM
Aww.. so sweet, poignant, waffy and just perfect...<big happy content sigh>

I think this is a perfectly good example of just how different we all are: how our past, memories and experiences are so different, and we grow up secretely still wishing for things we were robbed of to have in our childhood.

And when that moment finally comes, when our childhood wishes finally come true, they're often granted in the most unexpected ways. wink

Great job, Jana! thumbsup

Pelican smile

ps: Happy belated birthday, Karen!! party
Posted By: Jana Re: Fdk: Grownup Christmas List - 01/04/04 10:41 AM
Pel,

Thank you for your comments. I'm glad to know you enjoyed this. smile

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I think this is a perfectly good example of just how different we all are: how our past, memories and experiences are so different, and we grow up secretely still wishing for things we were robbed of to have in our childhood.
Oh, this is a good point! One of the things I always enjoyed about the show itself; Lois & Clark (and the various other characters for that matter) have very unique backgrounds and past experiences. Maybe we all kind of fill in the blanks for one another.

Thanks again, Pel!

Jana
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