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Yay!!!! More assignment fic! hyper

And some hot LnC action! dance

Really, Carol, this was sweet, funny, romantic, and not at all dumb. (Except for the elves/mafia reference. What were you thinking? wink ) Honestly, though, I loved this.

Can we have some more? I mean, they have to go back to Metropolis and face the well-wishers, right? grovel
Posted By: anonpip Re: FDK : Assignment, Hawwaii (Squee!) - 08/21/08 06:53 PM
Carol - This was very cute. Although I feel badly for Clark. It would be hard to find out your wife doesn't remember the first time you made love. At least Lois is starting to remember.
Posted By: carolm Re: FDK : Assignment, Hawwaii (Squee!) - 08/21/08 07:15 PM
I blame Queenie up there. The pheromone thing was all her idea.

That said...

We brainstormed a bunch of other potential Assignment fics this afternoon wink .

I figure that, in this case at least, Lois slowly but surely remembers everything.

Carol
Posted By: TOC Re: FDK : Assignment, Hawwaii (Squee!) - 08/21/08 10:48 PM
Ha ha!!! That was so funny! And cute and sexy! I loved Lois's attitude:

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"That's something we need to talk about."

"What's that?" Clark asked as he slung the bag over his shoulder.

"Where we're going to live."

"Are you sure about this?" He ran a hand along her upper arm.

She nodded. "You've been my best friend for a long time, Clark, and I'm sure I want to spend the rest of my life with you."

"Does that mean I get to kiss you for real?"

She shrugged. "If you play your cards right," she told him a coy look on her face as she headed towards the stairs and the front door.

He groaned slightly. "And what cards are those?"

She shrugged again. "You have to figure that out for yourself."
Ha! I love it! Yes, he ought to work for his reward!

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"You're really sure?" Clark asked her as they landed outside.

Lois rolled her eyes and moved away from him. "If you ask me that again, it's going to be a long time before you get lucky, Mister."
<giggle>

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He grabbed her hand and pulled her towards him, resting his other hand on her cheek. "I just can't believe this really happened."

She smiled up at him. "It really happened."

"You're really my wife?" he whispered.

She nodded. "And you're my husband."

"I won't ask you again, I promise."

"Good. But before we get to have a real honeymoon," she sighed, "we have to figure out what's going on here."

"Do I get to kiss you?"

"Maybe," she said, looking up at him from under impossibly long eyelashes.

"Did I play my cards right?"

"You're working on it. So far so good, anyway."

"Are you going to tell me what it is that I did?"

"Nope. Not until later."
clap

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"Don't move," he whispered.

She stood still and before she knew it he was back and sweeping her into his arms.

"Nice," she whispered.

"Is that one of those cards I was supposed to play?"

"Maybe."
Adorable. laugh

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"Are you sure about this?"

"I thought you weren't going to ask me that again," she said as she pulled him towards her. "But I know you didn't mean it."

"What makes you say that?" he asked, unable to resist the draw of that long, graceful neck as she inclined her head to one side and he moved to kiss and nibble along it until he reached her mouth again.

When he pulled back, she grinned up at him. "Because you're about to get very lucky."
clap clap

Ann
Posted By: Alisha Knight Re: FDK : Assignment, Hawwaii (Squee!) - 08/23/08 05:17 AM
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"I bet it's a pickpocketing ring run by elves,"
rotflol rotflol

and the rest was good too! wink
Posted By: Darth Michael Re: FDK : Assignment, Hawwaii (Squee!) - 08/23/08 05:31 AM
Carol, this was a hilarious and sweet little bit of fluff. Lacing the food with pheromones and having Lois get all hot and bothered during her honeymoon.
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Lois opened one eye slightly and then closed it tightly again when she realized he was in his birthday suit.
rotflol
I really love those two jump

Michael
Posted By: bobbart Re: FDK : Assignment, Hawwaii (Squee!) - 08/25/08 12:20 AM
Nice "cap" to the trilogy. thumbsup Somehow I missed part 2 and it made this more than a bit confusing confused until I figured out to go back and catch up.

These were all a lot of fun. I keep having an image of Clark just wandering around with a confused (but pleasant) look on his face through this whole story. Lois clearly moves things along.

It would be interesting to see the reaction of everyone back at the Planet when they return "really" married.

Bob
Posted By: Mister Data Re: FDK : Assignment, Hawwaii (Squee!) - 10/23/08 03:26 PM
Nicely done.
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