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Posted By: cp33 FDK: Myth and Never Hope - 06/27/08 08:24 PM
Beautifully written.
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A smile is on my face when a single fat tear rolls down my cheek. I brush it away quickly, full of shame. I’m not allowed to cry; crying would only make me feel better. And I’m not allowed to feel better.
I loved this line, it sums up Lois' emotions perfectly.
Posted By: Classicalla Re: FDK: Myth and Never Hope - 06/27/08 08:34 PM
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Many thanks to Nancy, for being so patient with me and helping out with this! I really appreciate what you did!
You are kindly welcome.

Well, you know I really liked this story, but I'll tell you again. It was beautifully written. It's yet another TOGOM story, but yet I've never read one like it. Very nice!
Posted By: bakasi Re: FDK: Myth and Never Hope - 06/29/08 07:14 AM
Oh how sad. clap
Posted By: Elisabeth Re: FDK: Myth and Never Hope - 06/29/08 02:59 PM
Not many of us can sum up so powerful and complicated of a story in a vignette. Wonderfully done.


Elisabeth
Posted By: mishmishat Re: FDK: Myth and Never Hope - 07/01/08 06:52 PM
wow! thanks alot everybody! this is such a huge ego boost! i should post stuff more often drool
Posted By: anonpip Re: FDK: Myth and Never Hope - 07/10/08 12:54 AM
I've been offline for awhile and barely have time to scratch the surface of catching up on what I missed, but I'm so glad I read this before I have to head off.

It was so beautifully written and so sad. I'm glad I know that Lois' hopes are about to be answered, or I'd probably be crying.
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