FDK: A Triangle with Three Sides 2/? - 04/07/08 01:02 PM
Another solid part. I like the differences you have in your story.
However, there are times you follow the original script when you don't have to. For example, you didn't have to include Martha's art since it wasn't integral to either the original storyline or, I'm assuming, to yours. That might have been a good opportunity to branch out and write your own dialogue.
As I said, this is another solid part. Keep up the good work.
Elisabeth
However, there are times you follow the original script when you don't have to. For example, you didn't have to include Martha's art since it wasn't integral to either the original storyline or, I'm assuming, to yours. That might have been a good opportunity to branch out and write your own dialogue.
As I said, this is another solid part. Keep up the good work.
Elisabeth